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Improvement of Crikey’s story: School Strike for Climate founder nominated for Nobel Peace Prize
Greta Thunberg has been nominated for the Nobel Peace Prize.
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Blog post for improving The guardian news ‘global climate strike’.
News Link: https://www.theguardian.com/education/2019/mar/14/youth-climate-strikes-to-take-place-in-almost-100-countries-greta-thunberg The Guardian’s news about ‘Youth strike’ have several parts need to be improved. Key problems: Multimedia & News length Hypertext Key points & Bulleted list Interactive Method Firstly，it do […]
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Critique of Gemma Bath’s online delivery of George Pell’s sentencing in Mammamia
I will be analysing the online article ‘”Breathtakingly arrogant.” George Pell’s sentencing delivered live worldwide” appearing in the digital-born publication Mammamia, posted on March 13th. https://www.mamamia.com.au/george-pell-sentencing/ There are two pictures placed above the story. A […]
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Improvement suggestion about news “School building collapse in Nigeria kills at least 9, scores trapped”
The news I chose is about Nigerian school collapses which published at China Daily on 14 March 2019. It is a brief news and have very clear point. However, compare with the same news story […]
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Improvement of the report
https://edition.cnn.com/2019/03/12/investing/pound-brexit/index.html This news is about sterling fluctuation after the Brexit defeat. There are two ways I believe that could improve it. Firstly, the article mentioned that the sterling was trading down 0.7% at $1.31 after […]
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The Improvement of the Online News: Big Bang: K-pop star quits showbiz amid ‘sex bribery’ claims
The link: Big Bang: K-pop star quits showbiz amid ‘sex bribery’ claims This news is from the international mainstream online news site: BBC. This news clearly describes the issues with direct language and simple words. […]
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Suggestions in telling the story of “Sole Survivor” in Ethiopian Airlines crash
The Ethiopian Airlines crash dominates the headlines recently, I decided to choose a news story from Buzzfeed, a digital-born publication, to give some improvement suggestions. NEWS RESOURCE: Buzzfeed: https://www.buzzfeednews.com/article/maryanngeorgantopoulos/man-missed-ethiopian-airlines-flight-302 The content needs to be less […]
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Online Delivery: getting more traffic or embracing more journalism?
An article titled ‘Six Highly Unlikely Brexit Outcomes – One of Which Must Happen This Week’ by Gavin Haynes, a freelance journalist, appears on vice.com on 12 March 2019. Compared with other ‘formal’ reports over […]
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A better improvement of online delivery: An Ethiopian Airlines Flight Crashed and 157 people died
The link for this news is here: https://www.buzzfeednews.com/article/nidhisubbaraman/ethiopian-airlines-crash-addis-ababa-nairobi-boeing in Buzzfeed News. The new telling 157 people were killed in an Ethiopian Airlines Flight Crash after takeoff from Addis Ababa. However, for the first sentence of […]
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Improvement Suggestions about Online Delivery
The news I read is about 2018 Youth Survey from BuzzFeed.